Posts tagged as:
1) Use the active rather than passive voice. 2) Be like Hemingway. Shorten your sentences. 3) Eliminate “THAT” word. The word “That” is largely over used. Often it can be replaced with a simple coma. When you proof read, go through your essay looking for the word “That” and see how many times you can [...]
{ 0 comments }
A Life Saving Exchange My fourth grade daughter was in CRISIS!!!! She was supposed to memorize the poem “Too Many Amanda’s” by Loris Lesynski. She forgot the poem, and left it at school. “MOTHERRRRR, WHAT am I going to DOOOOOOOO?” She cried, (at eight pm Sunday night.) “You could e-mail the author.” Thus began a charming [...]
{ 0 comments }
All content on [Applesassy.com] is licensed under Creative Commons. 
